the way I'll introduce each section.
This act is about a boy who kills a girl on her bicycle after she swerved into his car.. Later he finds out that she wrote in her diary on the day she was killed "Today I realized I was going to die." He spends his life thinking of her at every memorable moment.
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The image you chose is very strong, I am having trouble reading the type you have. I like that fact that you have it hand written but try and make it look more clear. Maybe have the image fill one side and the text in the other box? Add color to the text? Good work, I would really work on the "Dear Diary..." readability to the viewer.
I think your idea is great! I love the white space and the "diary" like journal entry. I think the full-bleed image of the girl looks a bit stuck on. Maybe cut her out and make her go across both pages in that spread? It might "mesh" better. You're going great on progress and I can't wait to see your next act.
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